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The better Luna

"Loved this so much that I'm willing to pay separately to read it. Normally I would never but I started this on Wattpad and because it came off of there I came here for it."

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Great story.

"I’m really enjoying the pacing of the story"

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Whew

"Honestly, I was going to burn the world if she took that asshat back. I HATE wasting time reading about supposedly strong women who take back absolute trash. "

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Amazing!!

"Absolutely loved this story!! I’m so glad Pen got the ending and man she deserved and was thrilled with comeuppance given to those who hurt her!!! Such an awesome story! Thank you author!!"

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Angst, Drama, and Romance

"I’ve been looking for this mood of a book for a while and it hits every note! "

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The Better Luna

"The story is great but there are a few inconsistencies. Editing needs to be done as far as missing words, punctuation and run on sentences, but it’s such a great story and plot it’s not that hard to over look it. I haven’t put it down since I started it!"

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The better Luna

"I love this book I could not put my phone down"

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Loved it!

"Following this story for a long time and just loved it! so many emotions and such a great read! "

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Remarkable!

"Thank you for gracing us with a remarkable, extraordinary, and profound book. Thank you for giving us the opportunity to witness Aspen's journey. It was an honor to experience Aspen's perseverance against all odds and her ability to overcome adversity after enduring multiple betrayals and challenges. Aspen proved to everyone that doubted her that she is The True Queen and "The Better Luna"."

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The better Luna

"Get Georgia back and apologize. Live with her useless brother and perfect blind bitch of a sister-in-law. It’s amazing how Bode didn’t care till the end about his son. I was terribly mad when he said he had a little one who depended of him at all times. We read all the both the narrative of him hurting and looking for Aspen, and then it was just for what she could offer. He really have to suffer for loosing her and not for her power and because he could not use her anymore. And what about his wolf? How he tried to hurt her in the last minute. Aspen should torture him a little, just a little. And where’s Jane, the woman who was taking care of them at the beginning? I’m always wondering, what happened to her. "

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The better Luna

"When will we see more chapters. "

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Great story

"One of the few ongoing stories, I am always checking back for new chapters. Wish they were quicker in being released "

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Brilliant book

"Love this book so much and to find it on here even better but need more chapters "

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Fantastic

"Love this book"

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OMG, Obsessed

"I'm am so excited to see what happens next! This story has been so good. I honestly would love to buy this book once you finish it so I can add it my collection of books I would read again! "

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Time to get down and dirty, and not in the way they were planning 🤣

"Loving this book. Really good story and the female lead isn't a push over as in most werewolf books. On a personal level would of liked POV from some of the other characters, but that's just me. But I do highly recommend the book "

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Loving the story so far

"Loving the plot, character development, and pacing. I would only focus on some of the magical elements more. How does it feel for her to shift? Her connection to her wolf? Is it just instinct- how does that translate when in human vs wolf form for example. Overall I love it. "

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So far I like where the story is going

"So far I really like the story. I was worried when her ex came back he’d grovel and that would be it but I’m really liking the twist to the story and where it’s heading. "

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The Better Luna

"I love the book so far. It keeps my interest not wanting to put it down. "

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Great

"Great story! Really wish I didn’t have to type a review. Not my style just let me pick the stars thank you!"

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