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Amazing story, I want more

"From the beginning of the story I was riveted. I felt that the author was able to convey the feeling of each character very well. Each scene made me feel as if I was there, feeling what the character was feeling. I'm not usually into futuristic stories, but this one leaves me wanting more! As soon as I finished the story, all I could think of was how I wished I could see this short story turned into a full length book. I can't wait to read more from this author! "

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Loved it!

"Whilst reading this short story, I immediately thought of Detroit:Become Human. Although I don’t know much about the plot of D:BH, I do know some integral parts, and if you enjoyed that, you’ll definitely enjoy this! This had me on the edge of my seat in intrigue, and I would absolutely love a fully fleshed out story. I can tell the author has real talent, and I cannot wait for more releases!"

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