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Amazing book, refreshingly different

"Thank you this book is amazing, can’t wait to read the second volume."

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Obsessed

"Every now and then I come across that one book that’s just has me obsessed. This book is it for me now, probably because of the bittersweet undertone that is so well done. Or perhaps because the plot flows so nicely, either way, I can’t wait for the next update! I totally would recommend!"

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A fantastic story

"Wow, I really really like this book. I haven't consumed a lot of System type media, but if this is what it's like, I'm now game. Honestly, this book is so tender and sweet, and the descriptions of the Weave of Fate are magical. I'm so glad I found this book, and I'm in love with Caderyn and William/Asterius. They're such great characters, and little Pluma is so cute! Not to mention the System itself. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but they can be overlooked easily for such an imaginative and wonderful plot. Keep writing!"

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Really Good!

"It is sooooo GOOOD! System stories are my favorites and this one has a system with such a fun personality I'm totally loving it. William is super funny and our ML is so handsome! Pluma is actually a far more interesting character than I thought he would be, and I'm loving the growing misunderstandings of what William is and why he's there. William(our MC) is already crushing hard on Cadeyrn so hard, and he's trying so hard to seem like he's not interested (cause he has to "Stay in character"), but Cadeyrn so knows. A must read! :)"

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Good Queer Fiction

"I read this story because it was LGBTQ+, but I genuinely fell in love with the interesting cast of characters and worldbuilding. I came for the gay, but stayed for the quality plot. "

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Scum Villain 2!

"If you've read Scum Villian's Self-Saving System, then I bet you will also enjoy this story! Both stories have some obvious similarities in the fact both are BL (boys-love, or gay fiction), with a main character who gets put into a "Straight" romance novel, only to end up forced to play the villain, while falling in love with a character from the book(who just happens to be a demon). There's also the added element of the "system" a mechanical program that's telling them what to do. But of course, this story has its own unique charm too! Instead of swords and cultivation like in Scum-Villain, Epilogue isn't the End has more of a gods and magic vibe. Our main character (William) also falls in love first, which is a refreshing change of pace! (By chapter 2 this boy is so head over heels in love he can't tell up from down!!). All of the characters are so unique and different, (like Pluma who is a griffin-shaped angel, super cute!) The magic system makes sense and the setting is so original. Not to mention that all of the things that seem misplaced and all the facts not lining up correctly are just part of the story! The world ASterius is currently living in, might be based on the novel, but things are going off the track pretty quickly and the secrets hidden in the novel are slowly coming to light. I'm super looking forward to more and highly recommend this book! 9esspically to anyone who likes fantasy queer works!)"

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The epilogue isn't the end

"Great hook, the characters and how the Arthur tells the story is great, just draws you in. Can't wait for the next book!"

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