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DRIFTING ON WATERS

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Summary

Axel Griffin, a normal human struggles in the world he lives in, doing dumb ṱ̵̨̡̬̻͕̬̐͑̀̏h̷̻͛ȋ̷̢͕͈͓̯͕͖͌̋̾̊̂̎̔̐̋ͅn̴̩͉̩̞̜̈́͜g̸̯͈̺͎͓͍̖͔̟̭͉̠̔̐̀͌͛̈́̋̈́̿́͠͝s̷̡͈̹̩̖̟̫̟̥͇͎͈̄͊̌ͅͅ which results to dangerous outcomes, he works at a homeless shelter, but doesn't find any meaning in the homeless, but why does he work there? will someone save him before it's too late, or will he slowly tranform into a monster, created by his own thoughts.

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
16
Rating
3.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

<CHAPTER 1>

Clicking noises are heard from the ventilation as one wing is slightly pushed towards the rim, cars honking mixed with drunk mumbles of people on the streets outside, a building called 309 east Houston that sits in New York, 6 stories high with 28 units, the building is tinted in a yellowish coat where black fire escapes hang from the outside, room 13 is where it all starts, a flickering sound comes from the kitchen light that sits on the wall above the counter, the light slightly getting brighter by every second, the stove turns on where wett butter is placed in a pan as it melts by the temperature, sounds of a knife hitting the cutting board, sizzling starts to form from the meat that sits in the pan, it sucks up the melted butter to cook, tomatoes, unions and vegetables fall with them to create a sauce, a hand grabs the pan as it is done for, it pours on top of the lasagna sheets, finishing it off with Parsley, it goes in the over for atleast 50 minutes on

375 degrees F, the oven door closes.


A sigh is heard as a knife the hand was holding is now laying on the cutting board, the fridge door opens to reveal 3 beers sitting under the blue tinted light, along with a small piece off leftover cheese and the remaining vegetables that got into making the dish, the hand now grabbing 1 beer to sit at the table that stands infront of a yellow with green striped couch, where the figure had now put his body onto, the tv turns on revealing the news that started just 2 minutes ago.


<'- had found 3 bodies at Baldwin Terance, they where found under the floorboards in the living room of a 43 year old man named Anthony Pierson , he had previously been guilty for attacking a 17 year old girl at a gas station, 4 years ago after his release of 5 months in prison, people had been reported missing near where he lived, it is not certain yet how many victims there are in total, but the believes are 7 still missing bodies, more information will be released after the interrogation'>

silence.

<'Today is sint patricks day,

a day of-'> the tv turned off.

"tsk, unbelievable" a murmured voice said, the sounds outside got louder and the beer bottle is thrown outside the window on the ground next to the feet of a homeless person that sits against the wall of the appartment, he sits with a sign that says 'i have a family' that has been put next to him, he looks up to see a person looking down at the open window in room 13, the man flips him off and the window closes with a loud bang.

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