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Perfect

"This is so well written I can’t even come up with the words. It’s not often that you get a reverse harem author who is able to depict each and every character well especially the male leads. I loved that they didn’t just merge into one and become forgettable and each had their own personalities and characteristics. While there were some grammar mistakes throughout the story it was pretty easy to follow and the plot was amazing. My personal favorite character was Brenton mostly because he not only had the greatest character development but he was also so open and communicated with her well to make sure she wasn’t carrying any insecurities because of him and his past, he also thoroughly rocked the HECK out of her world which I appreciate. There were some parts where I was like “umm in this situation ya’ll are gonna solve it by getting freaky??” But honestly I’m not mad at it. I wish the boys would have made more effort to make boundaries clear the moment they found their mate especially Drake and the whole ex girlfriend situation he should’ve never allowed her to touch him in front of Tiara. Overall great read and I hope to see more work from you Lina. "

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It's a very nice story ....unique yet complete ❤️

"It's a unique story with some beautiful relationships 💕 ❤️ totally loved it❤️❤️"

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Ancalagon's Gold

"I love this story. What a fantastic book. The characters and events are very well written. The story brings out an array of different emotions with all the twists and turns. Wonderful job, author 💞🩷💞"

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Finally a girl

"Thank you for your narrative. This sweet story was a treat to read. I hope you write more."

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Loved it!

"I absolutely loved this story! Other than the misspellings and grammatical errors, it was an amazing story. I feel in love with all of the characters. "

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Ancalagon's Gold

"The story is amazing but unfortunately I couldn't finish it because of the spelling and grammatical errors that were quite bad...it just spoiled everything for me"

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Loved the plot hated the grammar and spelling

"This is a good story with the exception of the grammar and spelling that is so bad"

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