Inkitt
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Rough but good

"Thank you for sharing your story with us readers."

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Very good plot and story

"Excellent plot and story great imagination very well composed like the style."

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Creepy

"I enjoyed this short story, and shows the writer has a lot of potential. Would have loved a continuation of this story. "

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Horrifying

"I liked the descriptions it set the scenes really well. Really enjoyed this story."

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