Review of the unexpected girl

"The plot line is consistent throughout the story. The way that the author keeps each character within a plausible personality that does not overly shift from one chapter to the next is to her credit.With any story it is seeing the personality of each character being revealed that is a compelling part of the story. This is done brilliantly in this story. The basic plot line is carried throughout the story. There are only a very few technical problems with grammar. These may be attributed to some auto insertions of words that the author missed while writing. Some of the descriptions of clothing and of locations from my reading to me seemed to be more than what the story needed. I only say that because I personally like a more concise description. Others probably like it more. As a reader if the description becomes to thick I just skip over it. The author does not let any of the plot in the description,"