What is your opinion?
Amazing
"You did an amazing job at writing out the emotions of your characters. I honestly think that someone would find your story as a great reference for the building of their own characters. Please continue writing."
Underrated unique story
"I loved reading this unique little story last year. There were several reasons why I liked this story and that makes it more unique. What I liked the most was how realistic the plot of the story was especially the characters. The idea of showcasing awkward teenagers as they navigate through their issues and several challenges at times intense even throughout the story is what makes this story stand out as unique. It is quite relatable and a well-accurate representation of teenagers. It is a different perspective of relationships than most readers and mainstream stories do and tend to like, thus, I appreciate it for that. Additionally, I also liked how it is a slow-burn style of story, it had a mix of funny moments and cute/fluffy moments. I also liked that it could be equally at times lighthearted just like it could be nearly as intense such as a rollercoaster of emotions and also that it expressed different sensitive topics yet that are quite important. I value that a lot, thus I appreciate that. Lastly, the only minor issue is grammar and technique, it is relatively minor in comparison to how good the story is. Sometimes it can be a bit spread around/disoriented, thus the only thing I recommend is to ensure that the ideas and wording are more concise, to make the experience of reading even better but not too concise either especially if the character is not made to be that way. (I say this as constructive feedback 😊 Overall, it is an underrated unique story that deserves some more love and that I recommend reading in your spare time. 😄😊 "
An amazing slow-burn romance that gets very romantic and makes you want to see what happens for the couple!
"Amazing! I loved how you wrote the chapters intertwining differing perspectives and the way you right texts is so wonderfully realistic that it makes me feel like I’m right there with the characters! A beautiful slow-burn romance that is gripping me on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens next. Simply amazing, can’t wait to see what you do next! 🔥 🤩 😻 "
Good Start
"I've read the first 4 chapters. Didn't quite understand the anger until the 4th chapter.. You've got a great handle on the emotions of your characters, I can see them in my mind as I read. It'd be interesting to see where this goes. "
