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A promising start

"Only read the 1st chapter so far, but it is quite the opening, almost fairytale-like in its style(which I assume was intentional). But there's not a lot out to really judge yet, but first opinions are very good. Looking forward to more!"

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Classical Faries

"You don't often come across stories about the Fey, as they are a far less represented supernatural creature in media (I blame Disney), but this story is a pretty good interpretation of classic fairies as both tricksters and deal makers. The "humans" in this story being the ones to cheat the Fey is a pretty interesting twist. Fey are tricky with their words and cannot break the deals they make without good cause (well maybe they can in this story we haven't really gotten that far). None of the romance has started yet, and I'm looking forward to how our protagonist moves from orphan, to princess, to fairy, and then finally becoming a bride."

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