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Raven is awesome!

"This is a review of the first three chapters. The author had beautiful descriptions. Although some of those descriptions didn't seem needed and not even necessary for the story. There was mostly build-up to get the plot going there was nothing happening really in between. I was waiting for things to happen besides the basics of her setting up her move. I loved the character Raven she's a hoot. The writer's writing style was perfect. The voice of the character really stands out. I was really curious about what happened to the main character in her past. I'm going to need to keep reading because I have so many questions that I want answered. This book will make you want to read to find out all the juicy secrets. It's great so far. Excellent work."

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