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Just omg

"I just absolutely love this book everything about it was great gave me ideas lot of them "

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Steamy

"It's refreshing to see a female in a dominant role. The story could benefit from a little more character building, but writing this HOT speaks for itself. A quick read with back- to-back scenes that are sure to leave you squirming in your seat. Kudos for editing, my eye tends to hang on grammatical errors, and yours were few. "

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Love it

"Love it love it "

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Nice bdsm

"Sad that she didn’t enjoy more his apparel. Maybe in a sequel… they could reverse the roles? "

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A review from me

"Hi, I really liked this story. However, when there is a plot twist, and the other girl is involved, it may be better to change her personality so it's farther off. When reading it, it sounded more like two versions of him than a completely different character. I appreciated how the writing was different. This made it stand out among the huge variety of erotica books and stories. The ending was well done and had a cliffhanger, which was amazing. I didn't see many grammar problems. The story itself was readable and not too wordy. You can read the story in one go, which is amazing for a short story. I hope this review has helped you alot, and i wish you the best of luck. "

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Beg for it

"Interesting story l like the reverse rolls of the characters where the women is the dominate force and male submissive kinky. Looking forward to more."

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