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Great Story!!!

"I love this story!! The characters are very entertaining!! The story just gets you hooked from the beginning!! "

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Captivating

"Although there are a few chapters I found myself almost giving up on reading this book I like where this is headed to now. Longer than my usual read the story is long and worth the read between Rosa and Antonio. Looking forward to see what happens to this crazy story love story! "

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The Mafias Forbidden Desire

"So good....couldn't put the book down till story ended. Thank you!!"

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I loooove it

"I looove it, sooo good novel!"

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The Mafia's Forbidden Desire

"This book blew me away. The suspense at the end of each chapter surely brings the excitement for the next chapter. A great read!"

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The Mafia’s Forbidden Desire

"Intriguing story. Keep that up 😊 Very we’ll written. You’ve done well with all the characters but love Antonio. His character is very well written. Itching to see how Liam’s character is. I have a feeling him and Antonia have similar personalities. I’d recommend this story to anyone who’s interested in a Mafia story. "

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Fantastic story

"Great plot. Technically decent with several errors that don't affect the quality of the story. Very bingeable."

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Great

"Amazing novel kept me on my toes. I can't wait to read the rest of the upcoming chapters."

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Mafias forbidden desire

"Loving the plot. Cant wait to read more... "

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please continue

"Like..more please"

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Wow

"Now I really want to know who the Father is and what she is Hiding. Sooo Good! ❤️😍"

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The mafias forbidden desire

"When are we gonna get more on the story "

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Forbidden mafia

"Nice story with amazing characters I like Antonio and rose relationship very much and I definitely rate this story ten out of ten"

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Mafia

"It's very good"

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The mafia's forbidden desire

"Enjoyable story. Can't wait for update"

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I liked the relationship between the brother-in-law and sister-in-law

"I like everything in this novel,it's really fantastic."

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The mafias hidden desire

"I thought the book was very steamy and left you intrigued as to which sister he’s going to end up with"

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The book is good. Totally love the characters

"I liked how the characters tried to resist each other. I’d really want to know what happens if her sister starts to fall for him "

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The mafia forbidden desire.

"I like the storyline. It is suspense. I would recommend it to my friends and family. "

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Getting better

"I loved it all but dislike having to stop reading in order to write reviews which stop me from enjoying the reading?"

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