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What is your opinion?

Elemental Godess

"Loving the book"

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Elemental Goddess

"I really like the flow and action. I would like to read the ending. But it’s a good read. "

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Awesome elemental

"Love the story line ,some sentences have a lot of errors though that have grammar issues as well. It needs to be rechecked . But a great storyline"

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Very good and captivating

"I like the theme and style. I was captivated by the story. I read this in a day. "

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Love

"I really like this book so far. I would recommend it to my friends. Can’t wait to finish it. "

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Elemental Goddess

"This book was great can’t wait to read the rest "

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Amazing Millie

"Fantastic story. So different from others I have read "

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Love

"So far so good, haven’t put it down since I started reading it. Some grammar errors, but I just read over them."

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Is there more

"I need more"

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Elemental wolf

"Great story ,great plot kind of lost me for a moment am still navigating the story else why am still here,however try to make the story not sound like an high school drama or become too predictable I've detected a few gramatical errors but i still understand whats going on keep up the good work author . "

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Loved the storyline but the grammatical errors were so bad I couldn’t finish. From writer to writer, always proof read before posting

"Grammatical errors"

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How long to wait? 😡

"How long is it acceptable to wait for new content? What's the point in investing in a story when there's legit a week to wait for a single chapter?"

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