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"There is nothing bad about this book"

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High school wolf

"Excellent storyline, can't wait to read more! Hopefully, she finds her wolf "

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Sweet Coming of Age Story

"The Wolf in the Mist is an enjoyable slow burn (and I can't emphasize slow burn enough!) romance between Sofia and Dave as they discover each other and figure out how to get comfortable in who they are not only to themselves but to each other. Their sweet journey would be great on it's own but there's an added layer of shifters but not like you've ever seen them before. If you're tired of the same old story, these shifters are different...they're animals that can become humans instead of humans that can become animals and that makes all the difference in the world. The mannerisms are spot on. Oh, and did I mention that there are secrets to be revealed? Fabulous world building and I can't wait for the sequel."

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Beautiful, Heartwarming Friends to Lovers Story!

"Okay, probably not a lovers yet, but definitely lovers wannabe. Okay so!!! Wow! I manage to finish this in a day, this just shows you how good and addictive the story is! This is a story about Sofia, a domestic werewolf cinanthrope who dreams about having normal life like other human do and try so hard to be normal, but find it challengin when she met a new guy in her school, Dave, who is a cinanthrope who likes to embraces his true nature as a werewolf. Now, after getting to know him more, will Sofia still keen to pursuing the normal life she thought she wanted or a wild-free life with her enchanting, kind, perfect, male-best friend? I am a suckeeerrr for friends to lovers story! This is definitely one of the best trope for me! I enjoy the slow burns, the relationship that the author build by build to emphasize the deep connection that Sofia and Dave has. Reading this will definitely show you how deep they care for each other, it is so beyond physical attraction, there is a real affections there between the two of them, and what they have is special. Like many friend to lovers story, of course there is the attraction, the confusion, the fear, and the doubt to pursue their relationship more. Kalyan describes the story in such a detailed, profound way that makes this two characters feels so real, as if they are real person with real feelings. I know it is a story about a werewolf, but do not let this disencouraged you. For those who do not read fantasy/paranormal but love romance genre, you will totally love this. You get more than what you bargain for, a friendship, a coming of age story, and a beautiful tale of two people that find each other in this big, wide, world. Maybe what kind of puzzled me is the fact that this story is actually a prequel, which means, if we want to have a HEA for Sofia and Dave, there is another story, cause this story is just the beginning. I am fine with that I just did not see that coming as I was sooooo waiting for their happily ever after! If you read it you will know, you will just dieeeeee to wait for them to confess their feelings and have their HEA! But I am glad with the ending. At least, Sofia now on a step to embraces her true nature as a she-wolf. Very highly entertaining. I am looking for the next book! Good job Kalyan! <3"

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Beautiful story about trusting and self-confidence

"When you start, you may think that this is just a love story with a fantastic component. However, it is more than that: yes, there is love, and yes, it is a good slowburn, but I feel that it's more about trust. In the begining, Sofia is just closed up, she doesn't want to trust, to feel anything for anyone. However, here it comes Dave, the new boy with blue eyes and a huge secret, for whom she, little by little, start to feel things. Through the pages, you will know her and her desire for a normal life, but also you will learn about a rich, complex shadow world, full of dangers and hunters, and a new, original kind of werewolf: those creatures, the weredogs, are quite different from what we all know (and you will find that the author knows a lot about dogs and how they behave). In this end, this is a story about growing, about being brave and able to love and trust somebody else. It is, also and more important, about accepting not only another, but especially oneself."

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5 Glittering Stars

""The Wolf In The Mist" by Kalyan_Writes is a captivating exploration of a thought-provoking question: what if the hunter became the monster? This concept has always intrigued me, especially when delving into supernatural stories, and Kalyan_Writes does an exceptional job of delving deep into this intriguing premise. One of the standout features of this novel is its ability to go beyond the surface level of what it means to be a werewolf. Instead of merely relying on typical werewolf tropes, Kalyan_Writes draws inspiration from real-life conditions such as "caninthropy," which adds a layer of authenticity and depth to the story. This attention to detail and unique perspective sets "The Wolf In The Mist" apart from other supernatural tales. From the very first chapter, I found myself completely absorbed in the world that Kalyan_Writes has created. The author's vivid descriptions and immersive storytelling drew me in, and as I progressed through several chapters, I became utterly hooked. The story has an irresistible quality that makes it the perfect companion for a cozy evening in bed, allowing readers to escape the cliché alpha-saves-all tropes that can be found in many contemporary supernatural novels. What truly stands out in this story is Kalyan_Writes' ability to break the barriers and provide a fresh and engaging blend of fantasy and suspense. Instead of relying on tired, predictable plotlines, "The Wolf In The Mist" offers readers a unique and thrilling experience that keeps them on the edge of their seats. The story is a breath of fresh air for those seeking an original take on the supernatural genre. In conclusion, "The Wolf In The Mist" is a must-read for anyone who enjoys supernatural tales that challenge conventions and offer a deeper, more thought-provoking exploration of lycanthropy. Kalyan_Writes' storytelling is nothing short of exceptional, and I eagerly anticipate the unfolding of this enthralling narrative."

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The wolf in the mist

"A very cute and interesting story. I enjoyed reading it."

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The wolf in the mist

"I really enjoyed the story and would love to finish it her on this platform. My only critique is that you need to move your story along … it drags, toying with suggestions of what’s to come, but never getting there. Otherwise, interesting characters and good general storyline. "

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The wolf in the mist

"I liked everything about this book. Very few typos. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys reading about wolves. It appears to cater towards a younger audience."

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Rich Character Development

" Before delving into this detailed review, I urge readers to explore the captivating world of "The Wolf in the Mist," a story that defies the typical werewolf narrative with its unique focus on cinanthropes (waredogs). Unlike the overused werewolf plotlines, this tale offers a more realistic and complex portrayal, making it a refreshing read. Detailed Review: Pros: 1) The setting and plot of "The Wolf in the Mist" stand out, employing a non-conventional approach to werewolves. 2) The author excels in character development, crafting a cast that becomes endearing in their own ways, even the antagonists. The characters are intricately designed, adding a lifelike dimension to the story. 3) While the narrative unfolds through Sofia's perspective, her interactions with friends and others are skillfully portrayed, showcasing her transformation from a guarded individual to someone who embraces connections while safeguarding her secrets. 4) Some chapters are depicted with such beauty that readers feel immersed in the moments, providing a unique and engaging experience. 5) The story takes a slow-burn approach, emphasizing the importance of friendship before delving into romantic aspects—a crucial element for the longevity of relationships. 6) The portrayal of relationships in the story is notably healthy, offering readers a positive representation that can influence their perceptions of real-life relationships. 7) SARA Constructive Criticism: 1) While the overall pacing is well-maintained, there are instances where the story or certain chapters feel slow, occasionally reiterating information already conveyed. 2) It would have been beneficial if the author had delved deeper into describing the scenic surroundings of the story's setting, providing a more immersive experience for the reader. 3) This is not criticism but a gentle message to readers: anticipate a story centered on the blossoming of friendship with a touch of romance. Additionally, a brief note at the start, indicating that this is a prequel to another book, might enhance the reading experience and prevent potential confusion. In conclusion, I thoroughly enjoyed "The Wolf in the Mist," particularly the nuanced portrayal of Sofia. Initially cautious due to typical werewolf story expectations, I was pleasantly surprised by the unique narrative. The author's humility and receptiveness to genuine feedback, along with addressing reader queries, added to the overall positive experience."

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