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Sumérgete en este pequeño rincón de versos: Atando los dedos. Es esporádico, momentáneo, pretende robarte unos segundos y dejarte muchas emociones en la piel. -Annette C.M.
Y hay manos, manos y manos,
algunas recorren con prisas,otras
son una tentación solo verlas.
Hay unas que son mis favoritas y hace mucho,
pero mucho que las tengo cerca.
Las deseo desde el primer día.
Y cierro los ojos,me tocan,
me erizan la piel,me inquietan y me ponen
coqueta.
Esas manos,esas lindas manos que tanto amo.
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shazy_faith: i wished that elizabet's powers would be envoked and she would be powerful and mighty and also seee her fae side of magic. alice would have been a guider to elizabeth in her magical journey . owen and jo obviously are married and viper and smitty will be like bestman[s for brax when liza and brax g...
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Cora: Decent story. Slightly predictable turn of events but I didn't think at this point it was a possible twist! I enjoy the stream of thought writing style this has, though some proofreading and punctuation could help a few spots. Recommend this for ebooks and forgive a few confusing errors. Enjoyable t...
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Karly Mcferran: Very cute story! I cheered when they finally admired their feelings! Very well done!
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Helhall: Before anything else, I’d like to emphasize that I really did like the overall story. Characters were more than two-dimensional, so definitely a plus. I didn’t even mind the shifting points of view.But...There are a couple of things that made reading the story very difficult.1- Punctuation is your f...
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Jessica Ennis: Beautifully written with engaging dialogue. I loved every part of the book!
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Chrissie Aghedo: Great storyline. Left me wanting more for sure. A little different to the others I’ve read so far. Hope there is or will be a next part to this story
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Jean: Amazing book. You are a wonderful writer. I couldnt put it done until it was done.
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