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His Mini Bear

"Love it so much 💖💖💖 Read it at first on Wattpad... Then Author deleted it and is rewriting it there.... But I found the og version in here... Enjoying it so much... One of my best books."

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Update

"Love the story! Hoping for another episode soon!! "

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When r u posting the next chapter? Eagerly waiting

"When are you going to write further please write fast I'm waiting from months"

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All MINE

"The story was good i like how you brought those ace friends into his life.I think maybe you should add a competitor maybe a mafia like ace to make him want to protect mini more.writing is hard work plz never give up you only give up when you die.am waiting for the next chapter plz send me a link when its out.Am one of your big fan now."

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Needs editing

"The story so far is okay. But it’s hard to follow along and to tell who’s talking. Like the paragraphs need to be broken up and the punctuation and spelling needs to be checked. The story would flow better that way. "

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