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That first break

"Wow! You are a very talented writer. Can't wait to read more of their story."

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That First Break!!

"Wow!! What an amazing start to a series!! I throughly enjoyed this one and cannot wait to jump in to book 1 (2 for me) 😊 The ups,downs, highs and lows in this book are amazing you definitely had me in my feels!! Thank you for sharing this with us!! ❤️❤️"

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A M A Z I N G

"As someone that lost her father at age 17 and soon after all my siblings when they went to fostercare I can not tell you how much this story touched me. The feeling of getting lost in the grief to the point where you forget who you are is something I would not wish on my worse enemy. The book is amazing and everything they feel is so well described it makes your heart break for them when you read it. Keep up the good work and I am moving to the next book ❤😘"

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Interesting

"This is a very good story. I love how the emotions are shown. How the characters interact and support each other. Very compelling, well written and a job well done to the author. "

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Awesome story. I’m loving it so far ❤️

"It’s great. Writing skills is just right."

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