What is your opinion?
Great Start!
"This is a really compelling storyline and I'm very interested in seeing how the characters become more developed as the story moves along. Great first chapter! The descriptors you use through the different scenes brings the reader right there. I felt like I was actually on the stormy sea. I can see from the cover that both main characters are very attractive and I'm sure you'll describe their attributes (physical and other) as time moves on. I'd also say that when switching between scenes, perhaps there should be a break (i.e., '***' or something like it) just so the reader knows they'll be reading a different perspective. Can't wait to see what you do with it!"
