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Great

"Wonderful plot"

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Brenda

"Oh my the world's are connecting. There has to be more. Sooo like Narnia"

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Amazing story

"This story is really cool and interesting and I really like this story but can u pls upload it more often :-)"

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Amazing

"Plz update faster😢"

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Interesting Start!

"I got to read the first two chapters, and I'm already loving the story. Ava is a very relatable protagonist, especially for me. She's a junior in high school and is seventeen (my age and grade), and her parents think of her artistic abilities as a "hobby" and nothing more (while for her it's art, mine is writing). So, naturally, that drew me into the story. I can't wait to see where the author takes us next, as Chapter 2 kind of left at a cliff-hanger. I would have kept reading, and I will when the author posts more. I loved her writing style. :) **NOTES FOR THE AUTHOR IN THE COMMENTS."

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Beautiful, but...

"Beautiful. I found it very interesting. I read quite a lot on Inkitt and I think a guy might have stolen ideas from you. I'm talking about the first chapter of "My meaningful, dead end lifetime quest". Check it out for yourself!"

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Avangard and the dragon tamer

"The plot and suspense is perfect."

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moving too fast

"There is only one problem with this fantastic book.,the events are moving too fast. The heart breaking events like michael kissing another girl needed to be mulled over by agatha. We needed to spend more time with michael as a character to actually like him. Agatha seems to be too at ease at avengard. Even though she thinks she created it she would not fallen into routine so easily. I did not understand how agatha was not freaked out about knowing how to speak the dragon language so fluently.Since she is known as the dragon tamer why is she not showing shello to everyone? that only confirms people's suspicions that she is not the one. i had given this story a 5 star rating the previous time. it can undoubtedly return to the same with some corrections or improvements.i hope that i can change my rating soon. p.s.: still one of your biggest fans :)"

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It is good so far good storyline

"I love the dragons in the story I think it would be awesome if we could read the story in the dragons perspective as well and if the main character in the story got hold of a special weapon of some kind that a fighting instinct can kick in your grammar is amazing as well you are a good author and if she met the fairy that she was drawing in the beginning of the story that would be awesome to read about. "

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