The Sinners Within
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The Sinners Within

This story contains themes of: depression, suicide, extreme violence gore, cheating, self-harm

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Story Notes

Author's Note

This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places, and incidents either are products of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events or locales or persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental.

Hello everyone! I go by the name Ellaine. This is my first time using Inkitt. I have been writing for years, but I’ve just recently made up my mind on which platform I am going to publish my books. Also, it took me quite a while to think of plots, settings, characters, etc. I am sincerely hoping that you can enjoy and support my first book on this app. Your comments are highly appreciated. Thank you so much!

Please keep in mind that Inkitt is the only platform I am currently using. Please tell me immediately if you see my work on other apps.

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Summary

"All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive into lunacy." Humans are egotistical creatures. Evil is the root of all sins; some are pure, and some are fruits of wrath. Is death really the scariest thing in the world? If you think about it... Aren't humans far more horrifying? Death gives you an easy way out; people torture you. If death could speak, it would just laugh. Laugh at how ridiculous humans are. It would ask you, "Do you prefer misery over death?" Death is inevitable, but it may not be as horrendous as you make it seem. Those who preferred death over misery—where are they now? Do they have regrets? Were they happy with the decision they made? Callista Montgomery is one of the few people who chose death. A woman who was extremely horrified by death. For some, she would be seen as a self-centered person for wanting to live her life to the fullest, but a lot of people think that she's a greedy person for choosing demise over agony. Tell me, is it really her fault?

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Prologue



“Were you happy?” Death asked. The woman looked down at her bare feet and replied, “I wasn’t.” She bit her lip because of how guilty she sounded.


Death looked at her as if it were looking through her soul and said, ”You’re a sinner within. You just don’t know it yet.” The woman looked back, taken aback by what the entity just said.


“How can I be a sinner if I was wronged my whole life? How does that make sense? I suffered! You saw everything!” She screamed. The hatred in her voice was obvious; she could not believe what she just heard. “Callista, do not deny it anymore. You know yourself better than anyone. Or shall I make you remember?” Death answered. It was used to this kind of situation.


“What are you talking about?! If I was a sinner, I wouldn’t have killed myself! Are you blind? Don’t you see my body laying cold on the floor?” Callista bawled and kneeled next to her body, showing Death her corpse on the floor. Everything was fresh—her cut on the wrists, the blood smeared over the walls, and spilled on the ground.


“Your death does not justify your actions. You’re a coward who wanted to find the easy way out; you did not want to face the challenges given to you. I thought you loved your life so much. Don’t you, Callista?” Death was aggravated. It wanted to laugh, but It couldn’t. For Callista, everything was a blur. She just kept quiet and continued looking down at her body. She’s dead now. What else could she do? “What will happen now?” Callista asked, not even batting an eye. “You will remember.” Death whispered. She could not explain what she felt, but she was scared. Scared of death, scared of everything.



“For a sinner like you, you do not deserve death.” After those sentences, she felt immense pain coming from her heart. She was dead, but the pain felt like she was dying all over again. Callista grabbed her chest and fell to the ground, panting and crying. She could not blink or close her eyes, as if they were being gouged out. Her mouth felt numb and dry down to her throat. She was gasping for air, crying for help—anything. The last thing she could see was Death looking down at her with a mischievous smile on its face. With that, everything went dark.



Let Ellaine know what you thought about this chapter!

yuwii
yuwii

Pretty interesting. More if this please. 🥹

3 years
1

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