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Can't stop

"I can't stop readinggggg! This is such a delight to read! Thank you!!!! "

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Another epic story

"This story reminded me again why this author is my favorite here on Inkitt. Although I'm not a dark romance fan, I decided to eventually give this story a chance. And boy, it did not disappoint! I cried, I laughed, cried some more... The Shattering Archives will always be my favorite since it's more my genre, this book is worth it! Good luck on publishing!"

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Great fantasy story

"Author has fantastic ability to weave beautifully other worlds. If you are into fantasy you won't be disappointed. "

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Concubine to the Prince Immortal

"Concubine to the Prince Immortal is one of my new faves!! Not over the top. Doesnt drag. Thoroughly enjoyed the story line. I also would love a sequel about the children!!"

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Concubine to the prince Immortal

"A truly fascinating story "

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Concubine to the Prince Immortal

"A riveting read. Emotional. Entertaining. Heartbreaking. Excellent story telling."

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Concubine to the prince immortal

"Love the story line ❤️"

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Phenomenal

"An utterly phenomenal story. Unlike the eroticas out there, this one - like all of Y.T.Morgan's books - are heavily storyline based with character growth, and here, primarily, character redemption amongst more than one character. It is structured following two main characters across two timelines; past and present. Written skillfully, it leads the readers on an adventure through the universe and through the character's histories, minds, souls, and hearts, across time and space. It is a fantasy portraying extremely well thought out and in depth worlds with an understanding of physics and biology to lend credibility to the creation of such worlds. The magic systems border on the realm of higher thought and the gods, transporting the reader to a higher plane of thought which few writers can ever successfully write. It combines world building with vivid imagery with the mirage of emotions so intense that the reader will find themselves rooting, hating, loving, and crying for our main characters. As the readers to this story have beautifully stated, this is a story which leaves an impact and stays with you for a long time afterwards. It is an experience, and one I HIGHLY recommend to all others who are lucky and privileged enough to stumble across such a story. "

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Beautiful

"Very well written. Deserves are sequel/prequel to be made into series! "

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Concubine

"Absolutely loved this book..Great storyline, characters, and suspenseful to the end. Thank you"

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So nice!

"I was in awe to find this story. So nicely written and full of vivid imagination that while reading...my mind also imagined all the places being described. "

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Really love it!🤍🤍

"Can’t believe it already ended. seems like I just started reading it yesterday. Thanks for sharing this beautiful story with us.🥺❤️‍🩹"

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Great story

"Awesome story "

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Highly recommend!!! Amazingly written

"This book took me on a journey. So powerful and heartwarming. Truly beautiful! A masterpiece ✨️ "

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Ethereal Depths

""Concubine to the Prince Immortal" is a truly unique addition to the genre of dark erotica. Y.T. Morgan’s ability to transcend the typical boundaries of the genre, infusing writing with a level of spirituality and purity that is both captivating and profound. Even when exploring themes of desire and power, the writing maintains an ethereal quality, creating a reading experience that is as beautiful as it is pleasurable. The high fantasy elements are refreshingly original, transporting readers to a world that feels both intricate and vividly alive. In a literary landscape where originality can sometimes be hard to find, Y.T. Morgan has crafted a narrative that is distinct and memorable. Their work not only entertains but also elevates, leaving a lasting impression on the reader. I highly recommend "Concubine to the Prince Immortal" to anyone seeking a dark erotica that goes beyond the surface, offering depth, beauty, and an unparalleled journey into a fantastical realm. I'm a huge fan of Y.T. Morgan's books, particularly the Shattering Archives, another must-read. "

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Couldn't put this down!

"I thoroughly enjoyed this story and couldnt put it down! So much so that I lost quite a lot of sleep and got caught reading at work lol! The storyline is so well written, very very few grammatical errors and just a fantastic storyline so very different to anything I've read before. The author has an amazingly vivid imagination and a way of writing that brings it all to life! I highly recommend this story! "

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Genius

"I started this book a while back but was so immediately sucked into the story I had to stop reading because it was incomplete at the time. I just finished reading today and the wait was worth it. Once again, I was drawn into the depths of the emotions of the story. The revelations towards the end were utterly gut wrenching. So much love and hatred, so much intensity and passion. Good grief I almost didnt make it...my heart soared, was ripped out, broken, healed, put back in and then set on repeat! This is by far my favorite author on this app. 🥰 These stories are like onions - there are so many layers and you will find tears in your eyes. Another masterpiece. Thank you for sharing! "

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Great read!

"I read this from when there were just three chapters until the end. It was such an amazing experience to piece together the story, going back and rereading, and seeing how everything is connected. It was phenomenal and I will definitely be rereading it soon. "

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Amazing creation

"This is a very engaging and compelling story with such descriptive scenes that you can see them in your mind's eye like a movie. Thank you Y T Morgan."

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Unique

"Loved the writing of this book. Such storytelling, very talented author."

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