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✨✨ great one

"This had me hooked for three days straight 😂it is so wonderful tom com with all the twist "

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Emotional Rollercoaster

"The author takes you on a heart warming emotional roller coaster filled with suspense and action and such heart warming moments. It was easy to fall in love with characters and the book was entirely hard to put down. Some grammatical errors here and there but overall a worthwhile read."

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THE MAFIA’S HEIR

"Really loved reading your story. It was captivating cant wait to read more of your amazing work. "

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Mafia heir

"A truly great book. Can't wait for the up date"

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The story

"I chose my rating because I felt as if that was what I felt about the book. The book was good even though some wrong turns took place I still loved it, with Kyle coming back and that being her bully I didn’t like that but hey .. we have to keep the story interesting !😂 I love the bond she shares with M (forgot his name) and I feel as if they should grow the bond they had on the beach back! I’m looking forward to see more chapters and reading more about this book, I can’t wait til new chapters come out.!"

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The Mafia's heir

"It's soo good I'm looking for the updates every day.. Thanks to the author for never failed to give updates everyday😘😘😘😘"

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Deep

"I’m on the edge of my seat! I can’t wait to read more! 😊❤️😎😈"

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The Mafia’s heir

"Well done author! Great and exciting plot!"

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This book is absolutely amazing, intriguing and interesting, I'd to receive updates everyday with long chapters so that I never stop reading😖♥️my heart aches when I wait😭 I'm enjoying it please keep it interesting as it is ♥️no dissapointments for me at all

"I love the book,rating it a 4 star review,One star went with being confused by the plots of why I have to read the same scene because it's one scene with different perspectives but aside from that the book is amazing please update everyday😭😭my heart aches when I wait🥺😩"

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Beautiful

"This book is exciting interesting and lovable I would recommend this book to anyone who loves reading romance novels too good "

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Review

"The plot is amazing and the storyline is not cliche, good job author. Your writing style is amazing 😍 "

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The Mafia's heir

"I really love ❤ the book and would recommend to everyone I just can't wait for the author to finish writing it 😍 It's one of the best books I've read so far"

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The Mafia’s heir

"I’m glad my namie😊 stood up for herself at last…. I wouldn’t take that and so she shouldn’t 😒❤️"

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Different

"I'm on the fence on liking this story, I don't like that fact this girl is naive. I don't is I would recommend this story, but I can't seem to put it down either."

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Mafia games

"I liked the whole novel so far and can't wait to see the end of the book and the characters are so well placed "

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Mafia's heir

"I like the book very much 🤗"

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bully

"some plot twist"

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The Mafia’s heir…

"Bianca cries over something that was never hers… this book has so much potential but the author has dragged i outt to much… a lot of background stories happening, but come on, 14 chapters in and the two main characters are yet to kiss .. Hold hands or be in each other’s company.. he nearly knows here… Too drawn out, too slow… needs to fast forward to the good bits.,.. assuming there are good bits…and it’s just taking forever to get to it… can’t recommend based on the story moving in slow motion…sorry author, but some major changes are needed ..cur or the chase and spit it out.. don’t wait until chapter 20 for them to have lunch or work together…"

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