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Legos and Pink Lemonade

Name: Legos and Pink Lemonade
Author: Manicgaypoet

Manicgaypoet 4 stories

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Summary

This Poem is about feeling inadequate to the person you want to be noticed by the most.

Genre: Poetry,Other

Author: Manicgaypoet

Status: Complete

Chapters: 1

Rating: n/a

Age Rating: 13+

Legos and Pink Lemonade

I’m just a pile of legos

That you will turn into a house

And when you're bored

You’ll knock it down

Lose my best parts under the couch

Now I’m No longer fun, so I’m off to the garage

In a zip lock bag until it’s time

To have a yard sale

And sell me for a handful of dimes

I’m just pink lemonade

Cool, and a little unique

But once you get to know me

I’m just artificial and unhealthy

Just have a small glass, keep it to one

Cause I’ll Rot your teeth and thin your bones

It’s fine if you like me but

Whatever you do, don’t love me

There are better options out there

And there always will be

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