Inkitt
Back to Story

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Angela and DeRossi

"Will they stay together and who was the mystery man (Hades)?"

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Wow!

"This book is great and it’s an interesting story with its cute moments. Just the right amount of smut. Keep up the good work!"

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Awesome story dark and delicious

"I enjoy the story line and the plot. Surprised by the history they had from childhood good twist. So far nothing about it that I do t like except it cut me off when I was reading. I’d highly recommend this book to my girlfriends are any woman who like erotic stories."

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fave

"this is my first book on this app that im reading and its awesome please update soon"

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Amazing

"This book is everything! Well written. "

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Angel of Hades

"I loved everything about this book. The characters, the dialog, the story it tells. The only thing that bothers me is that the story is not complete. Please hurry and finish this book."

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So hot! Can't wait for the continuation

"For someone who doesn't read a lot of books, more so erotica. I love the storyline. It's not boring and keeps you anticipating for more. It doesn't build up too long. The only thing that needs improvement is the grammar and spelling. Proofreading is really necessary. I would still recommend this story to anyone. It's a great read and will definitely make you feel flushed. I wish the next part would be released soon. "

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Good

"It was interesting "

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Angel of Hades

"Getting very interesting."

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Very sexy

"I like how it jump"

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Sorry, I forgot the title. I'm so interested in reading that I forgot.

"I like everything that I'm reading. I would recommend it to anyone that reads erotica style stories. I rated it the way I did because I like everything about the story. It is an excellent erotica story."

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Great story

"Liked everything. Can we have an update please"

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Omg I love it

"Absolutely love the storyline. Most definitely is one of the best erotica story lines I’ve read. I did notice a few problems with grammar and sentence structuring but overall an absolutely amazing story! Can’t wait to see if there will be more!"

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More chapters

"Proof read a lot of places where it should say he or she and it says the opposite "

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Good

"More to come?"

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