Not even Mid

"THB, it was hard to read and I couldn't get pass C6. It is slow, boring and just feel as if a lot is missing from the story. There is no direct plot just something YOU (NAME) seem to just throw together in a hurry just because you want to write a book. Maybe get someone to help you, like have them read the book, give you points and make some changes. Change the P.O.V as well, I get that you want to be different but it's not what readers are looking for, all of this will make your book over-looked. You can even use ChatGPT to help you rewrite the book, just have your idea properly thought out. "