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Never Broken Again

"I really enjoy reading these poems. It’s raw and truthful. Thanks for sharing. I hope my book Lotus brings out those feelings in my readers!!!!!!"

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Just stunning!

"Absolutely stunning! This collection takes you on a rollercoaster ride through the highs and lows of love, leaving you wanting more. The way it captures those raw emotions is just wow! It's like the poet reached into my soul and put my feelings into words. If you've ever felt the ache of unreturned love, this is the book for you. It's a must-read that'll have you nodding along and saying, "Yes, that's exactly how it feels!" Plus, you can feel how deeply personal these poems are to the author, which adds a whole other layer of connection and emotion. And let's not forget the hilarious similes sprinkled throughout; they provide the perfect comedic relief. Can´t wait to read more of your beautiful words Dezmin. "

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Every stanza is like a part of a rap song!

"I loved this poetry book, I binged the whole thing in just half an hour! I find that Dezmin, aka the author, has some really good poems in this book, especially the longer ones, which have great imagery and metaphors. I can relate to this book so much as well, as the plot revolves around heartbreak and a toxic relationship. The grammar could be improved, but it's nothing that can't be done with a little editing (it doesn't affect the readers understanding of what is going on). I recommend this book to anyone who is going through an unhealthy relationship, as maybe it will inspire them to break free."

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Heart felt

"Who broke your heart 😭😭😭l almost cried reading this but the end was a little funny . The grammar and words were heart touching and filled with emotions . really beautiful ❤️."

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I can feel your heartbreak come through these pages.

"Have you ever found yourself torn between following your instincts or taking a leap of faith for a chance at love? In "Never Broken Again," this internal struggle is brilliantly portrayed, leaving readers questioning their choices and desires. 
The story revolves around a character faced with a life-altering decision. Torn between the safety of caution and the allure of a potential soulmate, they embark on a journey that will test their character and shape their destiny. The author navigates the complex emotions and dilemmas gracefully and authentically, making the reader empathize with the protagonist's plight. 
The exploration of instinct versus caution is handled masterfully throughout the narrative. The author beautifully articulates the realization that sometimes, the well-planned path may not always be the right one when it comes to matters of the heart. This theme resonates deeply, reminding readers of the importance of embracing vulnerability and taking calculated risks. 
“Never Broken Again” is a captivating and thought-provoking anthology that will leave you pondering the choices you've made in your own life. It is an exceptional work of fiction that skillfully dives into the complexities of the human heart. Whether you've grappled with a similar decision or not, this anthology will touch your soul and leave you questioning what it truly means to follow your instincts."

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Absolutely love this!!!!

"It was soooo good that I couldn't stop reading it!!! So emotional and wonderfully written!!! I absolutely love your work!! ❤️🩵💛💚💜"

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Emotional

"Honestly, I was not prepared for the emotional rollercoaster of this poem. The way it started was with a sad and depressive tone, then a heartbreaking tone, and then the anger, resentment, and vengeance that gradually built up throughout the verses. The poet's ability to evoke such a wide range of intense emotions in just a few lines truly captivated me. It made me reflect on the complexities of human experiences and the power of words to convey raw emotions. Never Broken Again is the poetry of a guy who loved but was betrayed. The poet beautifully captures the pain and vulnerability of being hurt by someone you trusted, as well as the resilience and determination to never let it happen again. The raw honesty in the words resonated with me so deeply."

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Wow

"I was not ready for the emotions this story stirred up in me. I have read a couple of the other stories by this author (which are incredible) but I wasn't expecting this. I just loved it! I think anyone who reads this will be able to relate in some way. It's amazing how (with the right author) even less words can have more of an impact than a full novel. Highly, highly recommend! "

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Nikki's Review

"Thank for the raw and realness of this. It's very relatable and you expressed those feelings and emotions very well. "

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This book makes me want to cry

"The emotions in this book is so raw I don’t even know what to say I had to stop for a moment because the book is very very deep😮‍💨 but all in all I give it 💯"

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Never broken again

"Relatable and easy to read. I'd be definitely up for part 2. Continue writing more these!"

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A lot to unpack

"Firstly, the writing and rhythm is excellent. I really enjoyed reading it from a purely literary perspective. Secondly, the raw emotion and pain and feeling expressed is done so well. And from a personal perspective there is definitely a lot of can relate to in these words. Both in terms of mental health and toxic former partners, the combination of which almost never ends well. Keep growing and learning and pushing ahead, that is always the best revenge on those kinds of people because they will always spiral in their own misery."

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Interesting quick read

"I enjoyed reading them. Raw feelings. "

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