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A fun slow burn

"So far so good. Its a fun slow burn. There are some grammatical issues with dialog, occasionally making it difficult to tell who is talking, but it's not too bad. "

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Lovely little story!

"This story was very heartwarming and a little bit of a thriller! I loved it! If you want some romance and drama this is the story for you! "

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Overall really good story

"I feel like the plot moves a little too fast at some points where I could have used a bit more slowness and details. Overall, love the story. I love the characters and especially their snarky dialog. "

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