What is your opinion?
Improvement
"Hello:) your storyline is actually very good, but the ending and the story was actually very bery short So I was wondering if you would make like an extended version. Thanks"
Great story line!
"This novel has some great potential! The story line and theme is great, but i did catch some grammatical errors, but other than that, this book is good. ❤️ P.S The author is super sweet!! She compliments everyone’s work, (including mine), and is super kind to everyone. "
Not good
"Not good writing style no plot lol So boring "