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chapter 3

"Overall nice and detailed story and the background is well laid out. It's a well written story so far. Smashing job... Though the update period is way too long.... And may be continue other stories as well?.? "

Excellent Chapter 3

"Lots of interesting sub points here. A slow build to be sure. But you clearly have a smarter Harry Potter, more focused on learning. You also have focused more on muggleborn rights, with Justin introduced plus a mention of how Lily Potter was frustrated despite being so gifted. I wonder if you will have Hermione also pick that up from Harry so she will be less of a rules follower in this world. I am looking forward to what two weeks in the Cauldron will teach Harry. Hopefully he will learn lost of new and interesting things about this world."

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Time

"Cool update. Thanks. Alot to learn about this Harry that you seem to be laying the ground work for. Either going to be a ravenclaw or Snake. Cause his behavior is not a lion."

time is a fickle thing

"wonderful update , I am glad you told me about this site . I wonder if it's the older Harry fault things are changing, from Mrs. Figgs being able to keep and not going to the zoo and McGoggle taking him to get school things. All things young Harry could not change. Until next time , Gloria "

Review after the reading the first two chapters

"This is a time travel story with a twist. Instead of, as usual, sending a character back in time AND overtaking the younger body, the young Harry Potter gets a diary as well as some time to talk with his older counter part. The older Harry teaches him all about the magical world and his own timeline, so that young Harry will have a better chance of surviving the upcoming war against Riddle. The first two chapters so far show how different his life turned out due to be and one of the bigger changes is actually Prof. McGonagall showing up instead of Hagrid to give him a tour through Diagon Alley. Besides that we aren't very far into the story and we still do not know how large the changes will be. So far I can say that they are pretty significant compared to canon, yet are still canon compliant at the end of the third chapter."

Interesting

"On one hand, since this Harry did not really get the memories directly, just is being told of the stories, he is acting a bit too old. I mean, I can understand him acting older, but isn't it going a bit too older? On the other hand, the idea of a diary that has Older!Harry's memories and talks back will hopefully bring some... interesting changes to the events of Chamber... ... How do I "follow", in ff.net terms, a story here? And I'm confused about the review system, since it is a story in progress am I reviewing per chapter or the whole story until now?"