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What is your opinion?

My boyfriend's brother.

"The feeling of being not wanted by someone you cared for and to receive it by another secretly and the fact that he was more better that what she had. "

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Hot

"I loved lt "

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Erotic

"Nice and exciting "

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Love it

"Great stories 🤗"

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Short Stories

"I love you work. It’s scintillating and exciting "

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Shorts

"Love everything about the story so far "

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These are just so thrilling

"Can’t tell if I want my own chapter or if I want them just a bit longer 🤣"

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Fewest mistakes I’ve seen on this app thus far

"The writing style is much better than most I’ve seen recently with much better grammar "

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good work

"keep it up"

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Ok what do you want..

"They were too short. I like werewolves better. But your short stories are very good with description of the people."

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Okay

"Good scenarios, but the actual sex is too short"

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