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Beautifully written

"The author has a really nice cadence in this story. I liked all the mysteries and the ending was really cool. I liked that you kinda have to put together the mystery yourself and it’s not just given to you, makes it a very fun read! The imagery is also really nice, definitely creepy, and the descent into madness was done pretty well (sometimes people really struggle with writing this as it can come across jarring or out of place). Even though it’s a pretty short story it feels complete and not rushed which is pretty impressive. Would love to read more of your work, I loved this story!"

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