41 chapters read
Good
"Whole story so good, I was keep paying attention to the plots , it's so much fun. Everything is so perfect. "
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42 chapters read
Manipulatively turned as our story
"This was a very good story. I enjoyed it from beginning to end."
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34 chapters read
Great story
"One billionaire two women…ones a psychopath the other sweet. Can’t wait to find out what happens. Good job author!"
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36 chapters read
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"I do like everything about this book The author is a good writer I will recommend it to my husband "
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17 chapters read
Manipulatively Turned As Our Story
"I liked the story, the plot, the characters and the author’s writing style. I is interesting and exciting because of all the twists with the crazy girlfriend. I hope there are more chapters. I would like to see how he handles getting away from her. When I said crazy, I mean mentally ill. Her father should have taken care of her and not allowed her to interact with men. She is obsessive and is dangerous. "
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0 chapters read
Manupulatively turned as our as story
"So far good going will refer to my friends"
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34 chapters read
Good
"Love the writing but feel really sorry for Ana and the life she has lived in so long with her boss and his horrible fiancé 😟❤️ hope it end’s well and they both find peace in their strange relationship 😊"
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34 chapters read
Good story line.
"The story line and plot is evident and it definitely has the makings if a good story. However, the broken english is annoying and make it hard to understand at times. The grammar and punctuation is God awful and all over the place. I continued ready because of the great underlying story but the language and English aspect needs work. "
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