BIRTH of an ALPHA BISHOPS ENDGAME

Linda Searle

63 chapters read

Throughly enjoyable

"Loved this book. The intricacies with the characters and the storylines just weave a masterpiece leaving me craving more!!! I need to know who is waiting for nova and rainbow … will Anna finally meet karma. Who is Dion’s mate? So many questions just leaving me dying for the next book. Well done."

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Rachel

51 chapters read

Awesome Story

"Just needs proofreading and editing!! Hope this gets printed so I can have a physical copy!!"

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Lee H

3 chapters read

Bishops Endgame

"Very nice story I liked it. Though there were too many characters an not enough emphasis on Bishops Endgame with the world. Council. More character development with the main characters and less on the unimportant ones.,.. which was vice versa in this aspect.. could have done less with all that unnecessary sexing with hoes and more development in the plot to war looking forward to see that happening in the next book. Congratulations "

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Phoenix

63 chapters read

One of the best novels I've read on here so far

"Loved this book, can't wait for the next one! Characters are engaging, plot is fast paced without losing out on character development. Please keep writing! "

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karene911

54 chapters read

Fun, Suspenseful , & Well Written

"This group of Supes aren’t kidding, Bears, & Witches& Wolves oh my! This had such a well thought out plot, the writing got better and better. Be warned it’s only part 1 and the second parts not started. If you don’t mind the wait then you won’t be sorry because these friends mean business. "

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Martha Stuart

63 chapters read

Wow

"What a story can wait for to next one "

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May Swart

0 chapters read

Binding

"The storyline keeps on changing with interesting twists. A must read for those who loves an interesting ending. "

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scarbrough71

63 chapters read

💜💜

"Great read 💜 liked the plot 💜 love all the strong female characters and looking forward to reading the next book 💜"

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Birth of Alpha Bishop's Endgame

"Absolutely amazing. All the twists and intriguing ways the story was heading I just loved it. Can't wait for the council be be taken down and for everyone to be happy. I hope the rest will get what is coming to them. "

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Birth of An Alpha Bishops Endgame

"I am really enjoying this story, soo much!! Can’t wait until the next updates!! Great writing!!💯👍🏼💖"

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friedaluke21

45 chapters read

Birth of the alpha bishop end game plan

"Wow thank you. Please don't leave us hanging to long"

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Birth of an Alpha Bishop's Endgame

"The dialogue/wording is a little confusing.....but good story. Hoping Bishop as Cj end up together....."

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Amy

41 chapters read

Needs Editing

"The story has a great plot but needs a lot of editing. Grammatical errors, the need for paragraphs and incorrect usage of some words are continuous throughout."

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