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Holds your attention

"It's a good story! Oscillates between the exhilaration of new exciting events and the pain of those events not turning out the way anyone hoped or expected."

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Thoughts

"The excitement of finding your destined and loosing all in a second and then getting a second chance and loose that too because you forget to be truthful. When you get a second chance always start with truth "

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Aether’s Claim

"This is a really good book, great writing and Good author I would definitely recommend this book"

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Aether's Claim

"Beautifully written. The dialogue and the emotions matched. Even the small moments felt important to the story. The grammer, spelling and tone were perfect. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. "

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Aether's Claim

"It was a nice story"

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