What is your opinion?
RMV
"This book is interesting and thought provoking."
Really Interested in This Story
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Her Alien Protecter
"Yup…good story. Love Sufi, keep writing."
Wow
"Wow just wow! Read it in one go. I just couldn't stop"
Her Alien Protector
"I love that s story can’t wait to read more!"
I like it
"Can't wait till the next update. Please i need to read further. You are a very skilled writer. I hope you will write more story's "
Wonderful book
"Oh my gosh. I just happened upon this book this morning and read it in one day. "
Awesome
"Well so far from the other books I have read. There is more of a story behind it things actually coming together. Not just jumping here and there and making you come up with your own conclusion. It's just different and I appreciate not only the characters but the theme and plot. Can not wait to finish it."
Her alien protector
"I enjoy the book so far I like that there are many different creatures in this book. Hope there side many stories too come."
Entirely confusing and inconsistent direction
"It might just be me, but it was so entirely confusing. Writing style, plot beats, pacing, characterization, character interactions, dialogue, setting, themes: it’s all a jumbled mess or just doesn’t make sense. There are so many ideas that are introduced, always rather explanatory and disconnected. Some ideas that are introduced come out of nowhere. There’s no build up, no steps building up to something greater that the reader can piece together themselves. There are some good ideas present, but they are not elaborated on in any meaningful way and are cast aside. The ideas that are present have potential, but the text would need a fundamental rewrite to make anything work. Certain aspects are cliche to the general genre but in the painful sense because it introduces ideas in a way that is simply illogical. The dynamics between the two main characters has its good moments, but overall lacks clarity and is inconsistent. A plot beat would be introduced starring the two, but wouldn’t effectively evolve their actual relationship in any meaningful way. It was frustrating for me to read and I wouldn’t have ordinarily finished it- but I wanted to stick it out to be able to fairly judge it in its entirety. But it didn’t improve. Overall, needs to be thought through and rewritten for ideas to connect and create a compelling narrative. -No hate is intended in this review. It’s just my honest option. "
