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Dessert love

"It has some flaws but still nice plot "

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Dessert Heat

"I just done reading a super beautiful story of a king the bad and the good side in the palace alot of traitors even the king has his mistakes lots of it.and wife suffers a lot.this is an excellent story.thanks author for producing an awesome story."

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Desert heat

"I absolutely loved this. Free surprises at the end but heck this is a great book😃"

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Desert heat

"I loved the plot of the story 😍 it kept me on toss till the end thought the writer forgot to tell us about how Bryan died and the plot behind it. It is a great book"

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Very Good

"I love your story. Captivating and I can’t put it down! "

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Captivating

"So the story is very intriguing wanting to read more ...its interesting too I keep having to imagine .. I could recommend even jst pictures of the characters how they look like so we cud tally picture to character "

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God read

"The suspense was good So was the plot interesting. Love between Aziz n lily was clean and not over run details of sex which was extremely good "

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Great, but needs work

"The first couple of chapters are great, but their relationship gets a bit stupid after awhile. He shows zero trust in her and starts to believe people he knows he can't trust. The beginning was amazing, but the end is starting to get silly."

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