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Encapsulating!

"Honestly one of the best stories I’ve read on this app! The characters are so well written and the plot keeps you pulled in. To anyone on the edge about the Ko-fi hidden chapters- it is so so worth it, truly some of the most toe curling chapters I’ve read. And to anyone complaining about them they truly do not take away from the plot. Use theatre of the mind to insert kinky activities and move on to the next chapter. The story is amazing without the hidden chapters as well. "

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Great work, keep it up!

"I love your writing style, the plot is overall coherent and the characters are very well defined. My one and only comment is to watch out for redundant paragraphs. I've caught a couple of snippets that Say exactly or almost exactly the same sentences two or more times in a single paragraph (that were not intentional). Other than that little detail, i love it!"

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Periwinkle

"I enjoyed reading this book. The only problem I found with it was the Patreon thing. Because I couldn't get on that and oh my God, that aint really we need to do something. I need to be able to read the next part because I'm invested. And I really want to know what's going on. "

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Periwinkle

"I was captivated by this story. I had a very hard time putting this book down to go to sleep. I can't wait to see what happens next. Who does she actually get with? Or does she stay with both after she graduates? It's definitely a must-read."

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Steamy, Fun, and Captivating

"The author takes your imagination into a work of her imagination. Describing in just the right amount of detail that you can picture the world she has created, but not over detailed that you get lost in the details instead of the story. She keeps you "turning" pages and finding great difficulty in putting it down. I am excited to begin the second book, and am looking forward to the next part of Kara, Leo, and Shane's story."

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Good story

"I am really enjoying the story. I hope Kara and Shane get together but Kara and Leo stay friends."

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live it

"i absolutely LOVE this story! i fell in love with the characters and cant wait to read more! the story is unique and interesting it had me hooked from chapter 1! i will definitely be finishing this in one day! cant wait for book 2! 📕🩷💚🩵 hope all 3 stay together "

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Great story and characters

"Story got me hooked. Love the characters and how this progressed. The brothers opposite personalities makes it fun and kara having both at the end is so hot. We'll written and can't wait for more "

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Quite a read. Definitely for ppl looking for steamy reads

"This was a good book! Sad that I have to wait for the next book but I like the characters and I’m excited to see what happens "

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Periwinkle

"I absolutely LOVE this book so far! It’s got twists that I didn’t see coming and I’m trying to guess what happens next. "

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Very good

"I really love the POVs, especially the male one.they add so much feeling to the story. I have always been fascinated with the world of colors, and this story brought that world alive."

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Hot with a great plot

"I dont think I ever hesitated that less to join the patron version of a book. But even without some of the exclusive chapters, the characters are so well written and the way the plot evolves around their chemistry and how Kara's love and passion for her art and how she sees her world draws the reader in, is simply fantastic. BTW, as a reader, that joined the story after the change of the title and cover: perfect decision with the colours fading together ❤️ "

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Periwinkle

"I absolutely loved this book! Was so excited everytime I got a notification that a chapter was updated! I'm looking forward to the next book and can't wait! Great writing and plot! See you in August!"

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Toohotforme

"Love this story"

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Gurrrrrlllll!!!

"Omg!!!! I’m lost for words. I have never been soo turned on. This man is divine ❤️"

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Periwinkle

"I absolutely love the plot and smut in this book. This is my favorite kind of erotica to read and I've already suggested it to my mom and a couple friends. I'm so glad I gave this book a chance because I am highly invested in it!!! Thank you so much for worrying such an amazing book"

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Malightning57

"Enjoying the book and the characters. Like to see her with either brother or both. Interested to see how it progresses "

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Periwinkle

"I am really enjoying this so far you have great characters and describe them really well "

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Periwinkle

"I'm loving the love story between the friends, the crush on the teacher... Now waiting for more"

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Excellent Read

"I love how you go between everybody's POV and I don't feel annoyed thwt I'm not reading the main character's side."

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