The Fractured Angel
Another amazing story

"Love your writing style, the way you orchestrate your prose to keep us spell bound and hanging onto the pages. Thank you for another well crafted story. 💜"

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Tracey

8 chapters read

Tracey

"A really good story I’m glade she got her family and love "

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Bobbie

8 chapters read

Amazing

"This book is amazing. It shows that not all guys are bad and that you can never know who to trust. I love this writer and the books she/he has put on this app. I hope you like this book as much as I do. "

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Carol

7 chapters read

swtpevans

"Some misspelled words and using the wrong word and not putting words in sentences in the correct order."

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bwhit1230

8 chapters read

The fractured angel

"Well, it was a little bit odd for me but still enjoyable ❤️"

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keachsrch

8 chapters read

The Fractured Angel

"Great short story will look forward to any additional stories"

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Good

"Hot and Sweet 🤩🥰"

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Fractured angel

"The plot isn't the worst idea but the technical errors make it impossible to read. Introducing a main mafia boss as an art teacher in the first few paragraphs really made it feel rushed and not believable."

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