Inkitt
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Tracey

"A really good story I’m glade she got her family and love "

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Amazing

"This book is amazing. It shows that not all guys are bad and that you can never know who to trust. I love this writer and the books she/he has put on this app. I hope you like this book as much as I do. "

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swtpevans

"Some misspelled words and using the wrong word and not putting words in sentences in the correct order."

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The fractured angel

"Well, it was a little bit odd for me but still enjoyable ❤️"

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The Fractured Angel

"Great short story will look forward to any additional stories"

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Good

"Hot and Sweet 🤩🥰"

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Fractured angel

"The plot isn't the worst idea but the technical errors make it impossible to read. Introducing a main mafia boss as an art teacher in the first few paragraphs really made it feel rushed and not believable."

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