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What is your opinion?

The suspense!

"I like the plot and I feel like there's something about Will's parents we are yet to find out"

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Excellent but…..

"This is an excellent story but my only issue is no updates. It’s been a while and that makes it easy to forget what is going on therefore forgetting the book exists. Please update. This story has great potential. I also think their romance needs to really heat up with no more drama between the main characters. The characters need to show their strength between each other. Excellent so far but please update more. "

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Love it to pieces

"Awsome writing. Good twist on characters. Like Willows character so much, her stranding up for her self. Interesti g writing. Widh to read more from your pen"

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Interesting

"Suspense"

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