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"Don't want to write a review, the story was great "
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"I like the story idea. A couple things to fix- there are a LOT of words missing where the reader has to insert the words to make sentences make sense. And the HUGE fix would be to change EVERY use of the word "your" to the correct usage of "you're". Other than that this could be a great short story."
