Inkitt
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Love this novel ✨

"I like the story and it's in a simple english "

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I'm loving this

"Is there going to be a book two?"

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The Nanny Nichloas and Joelle

"Hot! Hot! Hot! Streaming "

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Technical writing skills

"There's a few writing mistakes that make it confusing when read. Sometimes, the names between Brielle and Joelle get switched up, and it takes a minute to process."

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Good

"Hmhdbyf. .ffv"

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Interesting story

"A little confusing regarding the Nixon's child's name in the story, some chapters seem to use Joelle and Brielle interchangeablely."

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I like the part when Joelle is very caring and loves children .and the way she was pretending not fall for the boss ,but ended falling for him . And the beach house part love the sad story it went well. I love it

"I like the way the story started and coming up to the beach house part was really sad cause Joelle knows he is really going through a lot Thekayx8 "

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Twisted Perfection

"I am loving this so so far! Thanks for taking the time to pen this sweet story."

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Easy to read

"Story is pretty strighforward, i like the characters, a bit confused od Joelle why she would not noticed that her boss is blind? "

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Errors in the names sometimes, Joelle should be Bri 😔

"I like the story but it needs to be proof read "

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