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During the Thunderstorm Natural Disaster #1

"Wow! That kept me on the edge. What a story of a love that is fought for. I would love to know more. What happens on their South American trip?"

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During The Thunderstorm | Natural Disaster #1

"I loved this story and enjoyed reading it, thank you for sharing ❤️"

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Good read

"Enjoyed the story"

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Loved it

"Love the MC's and how they interact. Good writing and cute feelgood story "

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💜💜

"Good short story 💜 enjoyed reading and looking forward to reading more 💜"

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Good

"I’m in love with your writing skills and it seems I like everything you write but again and I can’t fault you for this, writing a book should be very hard work and I’m sure you do spell check but if a word is spelt correctly then it won’t show like for instance steering and stirring so I again think whoever proofreads your books is not very thorough. They should try harder otherwise excellent work!"

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During the Thunderstorm

"Great book! Love the plot! Hated hearing the other characters, I actually started to just skip those chapters. I want another book with both characters and how their life unfolds. Only one question that never got answered. What did Ally want to do after school? That was never mentioned. Loved the book, great job!"

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From the storm to love

"2 different, complex individuals who realise they’re each other’s soulmates, I love it! They really do bring out the best in each other, especially Federico encouraging Ally to not be afraid to fall and follow her heart, instead of always putting everyone else first. I find that aspect really touching and something beautiful about their relationship. 💜"

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During the thunderstorm

"This is sooooooooo beautiful love story...marvelous....and full of great humor....loved it soooo much and enjoyed reading it....can't wait to read your next book...ty Author 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖"

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Loved it

"It's fresh and exquisite! Really nice story. It doesn't have magical characters wearwolfs or vampires. It is a real life story of love! Really nice and refreshing! I loved it."

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So much laughter

"I love the couple and their dynamic. Love stories that make me laugh. Great friends groups. I’m not sure how it will end, but I’m along for the ride. "

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