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forgive me father for I have sinned

"the book was well written. It has a very nice plot and excellent grammar and punctuation "

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Forgive me father I have sinned 7time

"Having to wait "

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Forgive me father for I have sinned...7 times

"This book is amazing so far. I'm getting tingles just reading it. It's so descriptive. So happy that I found this site and book. "

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Forgive me father I have sinned 7 times

"Intriguing book "

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Saucy

"I like the style of book very saucy gets the imagination flowing would love to read more "

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Love

"Omg I want more that was just pride I can’t wait for all the other sins "

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I can’t wait for the rest!

"I love it, can’t wait for the rest of the story. Hard to put it down "

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Forgive me Father

"Although there's a little confusing references on the use of pronouns and reference to names sometimes, your story ignites! Can't wait to read the next chapters. Being a hopeless romantic, hope Miriam will find one guy who could satisfy her and have a lasting relationship with him."

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Love this story!

"Well written, I loved the character and story line as well. It was exactly what I was looking for when I was scrolling through the stories. Def delivered. "

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Excellent

"How good the author wrote the scene it had me from the start. "

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Love it!

"It’s so good!! I don’t want to stop reading it. Makes me so hot..can’t wait for the next chapter to come out"

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Love it!

"Don’t want to stop reading and it keeps guessing what is going to happen next! "

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Good

"Good charscterd"

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Hot

"Story well written good plot hero a little weak I love story I like story "

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Loving it.

"Enjoying it so far. Can't wait to read more!!"

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It’s a little crazy needs more of a story I like the romantic ones as well hopefully ot will habe more nbnbnccfcdr hunk jijhn drdcv drfc of a story at the end Thanks

"Please let me finish this book "

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Pride

"Wow. Heading to Amazon now!"

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LOVE THE PLOT BUT SHOUDLVE STARTED OUT WITH LUST FIRAT

"Love the plot"

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Forgive me Father

"There are more typing and writing errors than I expected for a published author. The book is a good read, I enjoy the characters and the story. I like the raw description of the sex scenes. "

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Hot hot hot

"So far it's hooked me in! HOT readt!! I can't wait to read the rest!"

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