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It's GOOD! Thank you KI-IRO San. Reading this story is like eating at a new flavors only buffet. The wordplay is fresh and crispy!

"The story grabs you by the wrist and just walks straight forward. The quality of the story is compelling. The page will turn. Reading this story is like eating at a new flavors only buffet. The wordplay is fresh and crispy! A lot due from cultural phrases being translated to a new audience! Commendable! It's like poetry, some sentences. Here is my favorite snip of the story. (She has beautifully bland eyes that make you want to immerse yourself in them. They were always reassuring and full of joy, as was her smile.) Simply delicious. THANK YOU KI-IRO san. Very much. The surprise feeling of having a friendship when you really need it. Truth burns like love Mixing western and eastern culture as a personal method. Inspiring! The dream was notated like a letter, and a memory as well. Wonderful. Adorable. Delightful style feature Chapters have hints and recap at start! Really adding spice to the chapter! And let's people pick back up next week off day and still recall, like a respawn point by chapter in a book ! Awesome love this feature "

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