What is your opinion?
A title which grabbed my attention!
"First of all, I really like the way in which you described the cell phone -very nicely done. The way in which your presented this piece was very clean and easy to understand. It had a 'when a stranger calls' feel to it and in my books in no bad thing. I liked the DVD with the pentagram carved onto it - that would for sure creep anybody out, but it also shows a good use of imagination. I won't spoil it for the readers, but the way in which you ended it was brilliant. Thank you for sharing this piece. Mark."
Terrifying
"This. Is. Crazy. I'm anxious to read morw, but I'm creeped out at the same time. The DVD player and CD with the pentagram really did it for me. Not to mention the bit with the screaming yellow balloon and the cryptic message at the end to keep all the light on without elaboration as to why. Seriously, this was very well written and this is coming from a fanatic of anything horror/paranormal/supernatural. Somehow, this also reminded me of the Addams Family for some reason. Anyways, nice work on this! I'm waiting for chapter 2! "
