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Love Triumphs

"I love a story full of love. All the right things took their time but ended up correctly."

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More than Enough

"Short and sweet...well done๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฅ‚"

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Great story

"Love your storyโค๏ธโค๏ธ Asher and Hailey chemistry is ๐Ÿ”ฅ ๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿฉน. "

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More Than Enough

"Loved the story, heartwarming and beautiful. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. "

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Mswilliams

"A lovely read. Short, sweet and spicy!"

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Totally blissful romantic piece!

"There are a few predictable outcomes but still, writing is brilliant minus a few misspelled words. Always a sucker to romantic plots and happy endings and this one certainly did not disappoint me."

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Great story

"Wow! Love this story."

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More Than Enough

"Thank you for a beautiful love story . Well done ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ"

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More than enough

"Had tears at times. Highly recommend "

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Good read

"I really appreciate that the new chapters were consistently added & how the bad parts of the story was on Asher, rather than Hailey as most books are written. Thanks for the good read."

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Very nice reading

"A very nice writingstyle, exciting story. I really want to know how it ends. This isn't the end isn't it, please tell me it goes on..."

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I love this!

"I seriously canโ€™t wait for another chapter to be released ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™"

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Sweet love

"Nice book so far. Line the quiet understated drama goi g on. Very refreshing to fast my eyes and mind on. Do kkep it going. Would love to read more from you."

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Wow!

"Wow I like the story line, and it's going along pretty well!Could use a bit of editing for a smoother read, but I have quite enjoyed it so far :)"

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Avid reader

"I really donโ€™t know how I got to this book. Iโ€™m glad I did. Itโ€™s so good. Funny and sad. No errors that I notice. "

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Hailey and asher

"An interesting love story "

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Intriguing story

"Like the story so far, havenโ€™t been able to stop reading. Itโ€™s a bit cliche but hey Iโ€™m a romantic in heart so wonโ€™t complain. Might help to check the spelling and grammar though before publishing ๐Ÿ˜‰"

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Linda2165

"Hope they find their happy ending "

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More than enough

"Thanks for sharing such a great book with us, the least I can do is this, great plot, rollcaster of emotions I couldnโ€™t put the book down"

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Hate it!

"Hate main female lead. Asher deserved better,was good at begining but later ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„"

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