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TEARING EYES

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Summary

I never imagined my life to take a three sixty angle. Right now, I am drowning. I am lost and he is the only one that can bring me back. She's gone. He's gone. But in real who's gone. I was forced upon, I was abused and rejected. I was a bet and a task. A toy in a game of dreams. Yet I am the queen of chess, without me none would succeed.

Status
Complete
Chapters
35
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

CHAPTER 1

2024,

Life is a maze full of tears. It’s heartbreaking, bitter, pessimistic and mournful. Why do we have to get dejected by our life again and again. Why do others get everything easily while those who fight for their rights rot in un happiness ?

In life, there are many moments that you want to let go after feeling helpless, feeling alone. You are so much crestfallen in yourself and the world around you that you want to let go of the world.

It’s us ourselves who have betrayed hope by not believing in it and letting go of it really easily. Hope was always there, it was just waiting for the right moment.

The only thing in life that we should know is that we should never let go of hope because it’s always waiting for the right time to make an action. Never judge people by looking at them as I said before the prettiest smiles hides the most broken heart. If they are truly seeming happy, then they must have passed through all the obstacles in life.

You should burn and bury the thoughts that tell you aren’t good enough because you are special no matter what you are, just believe in hope, believe in yourself and move on. Because you have to keep on moving on for the story to start.

You know my life was a full story and when someone would hear me they’ll say that I’m lying but guess what it’s true. That I even decided to take my life because it wasn’t worth living that time but I still hung on and then …..

Someone knocks the door, But every story has an ending which is a new beginning.

“Come in.” I speak and start working.

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