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Summary

Lorelai comes home from a party to later see strangers in the house trying to kill her parents. She gets in the mix of things and ends up killing all who harmed her family that night and her using magic she didn't know she even had. her father called the cops and now she's in a mental institution where they drug her up thinking she's crazy. While there, she meets a girl named Amelia who also seems to have magic just like her. They end up becoming close friends, and one might even say bestfriends. Amelia gets Lorelai off the meds they give her because they found out it stopped them from being able to concentrate and do magic. Lorelai, being off the medication, realizes that she should practice her powers so she can learn to control them and never do what she did a year ago again. Amelia also practices her powers, but when doing so, she overhears in the hallway the doctors talking about their experiments on the patience. She tells Amelia, and they both try to figure a way out of the building. Things get tricky, though, because the next patients on their list are Lorelai and Amelia.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

Lorelai killed them, she killed them all! Let me go back and explain a little better. Let's start from the beginning of where it all began! You see, on a Thursday night out at a party she got an uber to drive her home. When arriving home she forgot to lock the door, this caused someone to enter the house without any problems. Lorelai didn’t know this though because she was too busy up in her bathroom taking a shower at that point. 


When in the shower She thought she heard a sound, like something fell. Maybe it was her parents getting into another argument she thought. When out of the shower she dried off and put some deodorant on and then her clothes for bed. When leaving the bedroom she walked on over to her parents to see them, but they weren’t there. 


Downstairs she walked and as she got closer to reaching the bottom step the louder the yelling had gotten. When she turned the corner she then saw what was really going on. Her parents were tied up and beaten on the floor while men that she saw at the party she’d left earlier surrounded them. The men were yelling back and forth on what to do with them.


One of the guys saw the girl and tried to grab her, but she slapped him. The look on the guy's face, he was angry. He grabbed the girl by her hair and banged her head into the wall. She fell while holding her face. Before she could even try to get up the same guy kicked her in her stomach causing her to fall on her side then holding her stomach. Another guy held her down on the floor while the guy who beat her grabbed a gun. 


The guy loaded the gun with bullets. He then pointed it towards her parents. “At first I was going to play a little game on you.” “Maybe let you pick which one of your parents should die first, or maybe let you pick which parent you’d rather have die and let the other one live, " the man said. “NOW though, " the man said through gritted teeth. “Now I think I’m going to just kill them both right in front of your eyes to witness yeah what do you say, " he said while looking at her.


All Lorelai could think about was the pounding from her head and the pain from her stomach. She had know idea what she was about to do in the next seven minutes  couldn’t be undone.  


“Hurry up and just kill them already, so we can get out of here,” one of the guys from the group said.


“Eeny meeny miny moe,” the guy said, going back and forth between both the girls' parents as if playing with their lives were some game. 


When he said moe it landed on her father, but he turned the gun to her mother instead. Lorelai closed her eyes and thought that maybe it was all a bad nightmare. It wasn’t though because a gunshot went off and when the girl opened her eyes there was her mother’s body lying there with her eyes open. 


Lorelai became so angry she said “ I hope you die.”Looking the guy with the gun in the eyes she started hearing whispers, but not of her own.  “Point the gun towards yourself and shoot yourself,” she said. 


Without a hesitation the guy did what was told of him. The look on his face, he was so scared. “What’s going on, stop and put the gun down man,” one of the guys told him. “I can’t stop myself, what are you doing to me, he said”? 


“Now pull the trigger,” she told him. “Bang,” was the sound the gun made when it went off. A thud sound came right after the gunfire meaning his body dropped to the floor. 


The girl feeling powerful turned to the group of men who all looked scared of her. She waved her hand in the air forward making all the men fly to the wall. Then she heard it. “Thump thump,” their heartbeats. In the moment rage filled her, she wanted them dead. She put her hand out as if holding their hearts and squeezed. They all started to hold their chest. 


“You ok you don’t look that great,” she said with a smirk on her face. “Please stop,” they all said while trying to breathe. “Please honey don’t do this,” the girl's father said. “Why should I? They came into our home and attacked us. They even killed your wife, my mom,” the girl yelled. “They don’t deserve to die though,” said her father. “Yeah listen to your father,” one of the guys said. 


Having enough Lorelai squeezed hard and all the guys died. Realizing what she’d just done she started to panic. When she turned around to look at her dad, he was already on the phone with nine one one. “I didn’t mean to kill them daddy,” she said as tears streamed down her face. It was too late though because police were already running up into the house, and grabbing her to take her away.


“Please daddy, don't let them take me away. I didn’t mean to do it. Please, please, daddy forgive me, she screamed while they dragged her away.


Lorelai’s father thought that his daughter lost her mind and so did the police. Others think she was possessed by something like a demon. All this because of what happened that night. She tells the people she thinks she has powers and that’s what she used to kill the men. 


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