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Incomplete

"Where’s the rest of this story?? 😫"

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Hooked

"Storyline is original, funny, sad and well rounded. "

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Looking forward to more

"💗💗💗💗 Great story so far!"

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Sinners on campus fun

"Felt right "

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????

"Vbhhb nngyg. Mmbbyg "

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Hooked

"The premise has me hooked. I feel like a seriously edited version of this could be really good! Characters are slightly cheesy but likeable. One major plot point that maybe we’ll learn more later is the fact that this club is on campus. How would it not get shut down? Still reading though want to see where it goes!"

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Dhje

"Bsnsnsn xuxn xuzn"

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